p2p/simulations: improve README language (#24051)

p2p/simulations/README.md

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 # devp2p Simulations
 
-The `p2p/simulations` package implements a simulation framework which supports
+The `p2p/simulations` package implements a simulation framework that supports
-creating a collection of devp2p nodes, connecting them together to form a
+creating a collection of devp2p nodes, connecting them to form a
 simulation network, performing simulation actions in that network and then
 extracting useful information.
 
@@ -65,10 +65,10 @@ localhost ports.
 
 ## Network
 
-A simulation network is created with an ID and default service (which is used
+A simulation network is created with an ID and default service. The default
-if a node is created without an explicit service), exposes methods for
+service is used if a node is created without an explicit service. The 
-creating, starting, stopping, connecting and disconnecting nodes, and emits
+network has exposed methods for creating, starting, stopping, connecting 
-events when certain actions occur.
+and disconnecting nodes. It also emits events when certain actions occur.
 
 ### Events
 
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ A simulation network emits the following events:
 
 The events have a "control" flag which when set indicates that the event is the
 outcome of a controlled simulation action (e.g. creating a node or explicitly
-connecting two nodes together).
+connecting two nodes).
 
 This is in contrast to a non-control event, otherwise called a "live" event,
 which is the outcome of something happening in the network as a result of a
@@ -98,12 +98,12 @@ network and then wait for expectations to be met.
 With a running simulation network, the `Simulation.Run` method can be called
 with a `Step` which has the following fields:
 
-* `Action` - a function which performs some action in the network
+* `Action` - a function that performs some action in the network
 
 * `Expect` - an expectation function which returns whether or not a
     given node meets the expectation
 
-* `Trigger` - a channel which receives node IDs which then trigger a check
+* `Trigger` - a channel that receives node IDs which then trigger a check
     of the expectation function to be performed against that node
 
 As a concrete example, consider a simulated network of Ethereum nodes. An
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ the expectation and what network events were emitted during the step run.
 
 ## HTTP API
 
-The simulation framework includes a HTTP API which can be used to control the
+The simulation framework includes a HTTP API that can be used to control the
 simulation.
 
 The API is initialised with a particular node adapter and has the following